Source of Joy is the first book in the Connection series.
The document is available in Google Docs. Just email me for the link at lynelle@kreativecollectiv.com.
I try to add a chapter a day so any feedback will be appreciated.
So far it is a 90k draft.
Genre: multi-generational family saga, Christian fiction, romance,
mystery, and adventure.
Questions to consider throughout the storyline:
1. How realistic do you find the characters?
2. Is there any part within the story that's unclear?
3. Since I know little about America or ranch life in general, your
input in any of these topics will be taken into consideration. I try to do as
much research as possible, but it's possible to still miss something. This will
help to make the story more believable.
4. Are the characters realistic and relatable?
5. Does the storyline have a good flow or are there areas that needs to
be rewritten?
Synopsis:
Source of Joy is a story of love and
loss that brings a few generations together in a mutual bond of understanding
and faith. Following the path of less resistance, be faithful to one’s dreams
and God’s word might be harder than they thought.
One woman’s quest to be reunited with
her son has a snowball effect on all she encounters. Trapped in a loveless marriage,
Simone Stevenson walks a road of unfulfilled dreams while she remains in the
shadows of a foolish man. As soon as her son follows his dreams, she withdraws
in a shell of propriety and becomes a puppet with a lonely existence.
When she tastes the freedom at the Calloway
Ranch, she realised she cannot return to her old manner of life. Back in South
Africa, danger meets her as John Stevenson's secrets threaten to surface. She
learns to cope with this growing tension and spend much time against the mountains
of Camps Bay for guidance. That her son is happy helps to ease the pain of
separation and she waits patiently for her next move.
Bending the rules to keep his secret,
John Stevenson will stop at nothing. Even commit murder if that will keep his
secret safe. Living a double life, he soon realises that he has choices to
make.
Against his father’s wishes, James
Stevenson ends up on a Montana Ranch where the owner and his son teach him
about ranch life, horses, and the freedom to follow your dream. Only during her
brief visit does he realise the price she pays to visit him, and it leaves him
with more questions.
Tripp Calloway leads a quiet
existence in the Montana valley nestled between mountains and rivers where
peace reigns. He heads the ranch with a strict hand and brook no excuses while
he allows his son the space to grow. It is only when he meets Simone Stevenson
that he realises he wants more in life. He, too, is challenged with lies that
threaten to derail him and has to set his longing for a family aside. But a
promise from God helps him to remain faithful to his dream and take this
momentary delay as part of his process.
Celeste Stevenson knows about Simone,
but Simone doesn’t know about Celeste. With her family at risk, she stop at
nothing to keep her secret from being discovered.
All the characters involved in the
plot trust God for a breakthrough in their lives. Will they listen or will life
take its course and ran wild through them? How will the decisions they make now
affect their futures later? Will Simone’s dream be fulfilled, or will she
remain married to a foolish man?
Tracy Marshall is the daughter of Ben
Marshall, a neighbouring ranch owner, with a crush on James. When Tripp offers
her a position at the Conway Ranch, it gives her time to get better acquainted
with the South African. But the two lovers might not overcome the brother's
interference.
Travis Calloway has trust issues
since his mother left him at a very young age. Simone helps him to get over
this distrust and introduce him to a woman who works in the local diner. After
an enormous loss, he asks God for help and has to trust His guidance as he
continues to find his way.
A young flight attendant ends up in
Billings, Montana. A world foreign to her. With nothing left to do, Mindy Botha
follows a woman she has met once in her life to an unknown destination. The
divine intervention connects her with a man so perfect for her she follows him
blindly. Will she be able to put her dreams aside and follow God’s direction
instead?
You can find the chapters at my website Kreativ Collectiv - https://www.kreativcollectiv.com/.../the-connection-series/
Or, if you are a member at Story Origin, you will find it here - https://storyoriginapp.com/.../3db30994-6ef5-4f03-b7f7...
